Does this poem totally suck?
You're my best friend
Everything was great until I fell for you
I told you that, and it caused all communication to extremity
Until I told you that I didn't care for you even though I do
You now tell me more or less her
The girl you've liked for years
My vision starts to become just a blur
Who know something like this could bring so many tears
I never let you see me cry
I lie a smile so you'll never know
That me being over you is just a lie
But I can never agree to that show
I'll wait for you
Even though I know you'll never want me
You could call me stupid for that, I think so too
Waiting for you even though I know we'll never be
She'll never meticulousness about you like I do
But that is one point you'll never see
It was really cute x.x I can`t stand break ups and stuff though. I know this one relationship will last, but I'm terrified of losing him :P
And if this really happened, I'm sorry to hear =/ I hope you carry better soon.
Erm... The message you're trying to get across is a devout one, but structurally... well, frankly, it needs a lot of work. There's no rhythm whatsoever, it's resembling reading a news article or something.
Just keep working on it!
i'm sorry :[
-hugz you-
That is beautiful. Simply wonderful!
Answers: its good, but theres no rhythm to it.meaning the lines are too long in some place and too short within others...
but it is a very good poem
It's okay but I think it doesn't flow severely smoothly.
i like it
sooo. yes
it's good
i like this so much.
It kind of reminds me of teardrops on my guitar by taylor swift.
I approaching it it's a good poem
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I really stipulation guidance! About boys?
Im a teen who have have sex but own a ton of question?
Everything was great until I fell for you
I told you that, and it caused all communication to extremity
Until I told you that I didn't care for you even though I do
You now tell me more or less her
The girl you've liked for years
My vision starts to become just a blur
Who know something like this could bring so many tears
I never let you see me cry
I lie a smile so you'll never know
That me being over you is just a lie
But I can never agree to that show
I'll wait for you
Even though I know you'll never want me
You could call me stupid for that, I think so too
Waiting for you even though I know we'll never be
She'll never meticulousness about you like I do
But that is one point you'll never see
It was really cute x.x I can`t stand break ups and stuff though. I know this one relationship will last, but I'm terrified of losing him :P
And if this really happened, I'm sorry to hear =/ I hope you carry better soon.
Erm... The message you're trying to get across is a devout one, but structurally... well, frankly, it needs a lot of work. There's no rhythm whatsoever, it's resembling reading a news article or something.
Just keep working on it!
i'm sorry :[
-hugz you-
That is beautiful. Simply wonderful!
Answers: its good, but theres no rhythm to it.meaning the lines are too long in some place and too short within others...
but it is a very good poem
It's okay but I think it doesn't flow severely smoothly.
i like it
sooo. yes
it's good
i like this so much.
It kind of reminds me of teardrops on my guitar by taylor swift.
I approaching it it's a good poem
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